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Seven Moments in the Life of Maren O'Connor by kes7    Rated: K      Reviews (70) 
Summary:

Seven scenes between 100 and 500 words.  Some connect, some don't.  Just seven random moments in the life of Maren O'Connor, eventual chief engineer of the USS Tesseract.   

Written for the Twelve Trials of Triskelion Ficlet Flashdance 2013.


Chapters: 7    Table of Contents
Categories: Voyager, Expanded Universes
Characters: Icheb, O'Connor, Maren, Seven of Nine
Genre: Drama, Family, General, Romance
Warnings: None
 Series: Star Trek: Tesseract, Tesseract: The Academy Years
Completed: Yes    Word count: 3164    Read Count: 15380
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 25 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Gifted

Oh, this is lovely. I enjoyed a child's view on a half-human classmate; the descriptors ring very true.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I just figure that by the 2360s in the Federation, aliens are so commonplace that it takes something really different to faze or interest a kid who's just grown up with it.  Nose ridges and funny hairstyles?  Not quite going to do it.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: How I Met Your 'Mother', Part 2

Oh, quite a question. I can't wait to see the answer. :)

Author's Response:

You didn't have to wait long.  :)  Answer's up.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Confession

Oh, Icheb. I want to hold him, too.

Author's Response:

<3  

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: The Truth Hurts

Maren's a sweetheart. And I think we can all identify with her, in some way, when we've come to accept our partners no matter what.

Author's Response:

That moment when you realize you don't love a person because of *what* he (or she) is ... you love him because of *who* he is. 

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Starbase 12

Oh, man, him asking actually caught me by surprise. It was a fun little breath-catch. How gorgeous.

Author's Response:

XD

Thanks, Erin.  It caught Maren by surprise, too!

Contrast by SLWalker    Rated: T      Reviews (44) 
Summary: (2228-2242) - Scotty and Corry; snippets of their very young lives.

Written for the Twelve Trials.
Chapters: 7    Table of Contents
Categories: Original Series
Characters: Corrigan, Andrew (Corry), Scott, Montgomery (Scotty)
Genre: General
Warnings: None
 Series: Arc of the Wolf: Uncategorized, Arc of the Wolf
Completed: Yes    Word count: 3143    Read Count: 13381
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 25 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Eight

Still lovely on re-read

Author's Response: Thanks. <3

Heghlu'meH QaQ jajvam! by Kirok-Of-LStok    Rated: M      Reviews (24) 
Summary: "I rather believe that time is a companion who goes with us on the journey and reminds us to cherish every moment because they'll never come again." - Cpt Jean Luc Picard

Kirok must decide between an honourable death or a living death.
Chapters: 6    Table of Contents
Categories: Mirror Universe
Characters: Ensemble Cast - Mirror
Genre: Drama
Warnings: Character Death
 Series: None
Completed: No    Word count: 2855    Read Count: 13112
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 24 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Moonrise

Paring down is one of the hardest things for me, too. The imagery here was amazing. You don't seem to have lost anything for the paring.

Author's Response: Thanks ('v') The scenes that I'm stitching together here are very cinematic, I can see them vividly in my mind's eye I'm trying to play to the Theatre Of The Mind - It's why I prefer full cast audio books over audio drama: atmospheric reading of description can really set the scene!

Conversations with Heroes by jespah    Rated: K+      Reviews (80) 
Summary:

On March 19th, 2154, filmmaker Carlos Castillo interviews members of the NX-01 crew about their impressions and memories of the Xindi War.Conversations With Heroes


Chapters: 7    Table of Contents
Categories: Enterprise, Expanded Universes
Characters: Archer, Jonathan, Hayes, J., O'Day, Lili, Reed, Malcolm
Genre: Drama
Warnings: None
 Series: In Between Days
Completed: Yes    Word count: 1674    Read Count: 13654
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 25 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Oooh, intrigued.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Captain Jonathan Archer

Hah. The freedom of information, and then the abrupt cutoff. I like it.

Author's Response:

Thank you - that nerve got hit just a little too hard ....

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Crewman Maryam Haroun

Oh, that hurts. That poor dear.

Author's Response:

She is somewhat innocent, and is well aware of how removed she is from the other members of the crew, but still strives to be a part of things. For Maryam, if she isn't on duty or asleep or eating, then a lot of the time she's praying, and for her that's almost like getting out and pushing. To be unable to do that is painful and unsettling and then when something happens, she feels guilty.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Ensign Charlotte Lilienne O'Day

What a beautiful person, and what a terrible pain to carry.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! Lili is one of my most fully-realized characters. She can be happy and philosophical and goofy, too.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Lieutenant Malcolm Reed

You know, you're making me wish I gave Enterprise more than a passing viewing with these pieces.

Author's Response:

I am honored! :)

The Doctor is Out by Mackenzie Calhoun    Rated: K      Reviews (10) 
Summary: Ficlet#1 for the Triskelion rites

chapters start and end for Beverly Crusher
Chapters: 1    Table of Contents
Categories: Next Generation
Characters: Crusher, Beverly
Genre: None
Warnings: None
 Series: Always Possibilities: Further Adventures of Beverly Crusher
Completed: Yes    Word count: 421    Read Count: 1371
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 19 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter

Oh, I love this little shot of her before fate. I dearly enjoyed this.

Author's Response: my thanks indeed.

Lives of Dax: The Fall by CaptainSarine    Rated: K      Reviews (71) 
Summary: Following in the footsteps of the Lives of Dax anthology, this little series of ficlets will trace the existence of the Dax symbiont through the days of the Fall of the Federation and the rule of the Dominion.

Part of the Restoration universe.

Begun as part of the Ficlet Flashdance during The Twelve Trials of Triskelion 2013
Chapters: 7    Table of Contents
Categories: Alternate Universes, Deep Space Nine, Next Generation, Expanded Universes
Characters: Data, Dax, Ezri, Dax, Jadzia, Ensemble Cast - DS9, Worf
Genre: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Drama, General, Other
Warnings: Adult Language, Adult Situations, Character Death
 Series: Star Trek: Restoration
Completed: Yes    Word count: 3407    Read Count: 14805
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 26 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Battle of Kaskora

Oh, Jadzia.

She will ever and always break my heart, and so does this piece. Beautiful.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Ezri

This feels... so horrible and wrong. That he can order upon her a violation of her body and force a joining, it's just... awful. But it rings very possible. Probable. And on the other side, everyone's familiarity with Dax makes it even more painful.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The Battle of Bajor

I got chills with this one; not to mention the heartache. Her struggle pulls in all directions, and I love what you've done with it.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: The Death of Trill

Oh, Ezri. She remind me a little of the Doctor. Last of his race, having to choose survival and life instead of vengeance so many times. This was aching.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: A Light in the Darkness

She calls upon them all to remember how to be a leader. See, the thing was, while I always really adored Ezri, I suffered from the death of Jadzia and as a result couldn't attach to her the same way. It left me missing something. I feel like reading these snippets has given that something back. Thank you for it.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Calym

And there she goes. And the fact that it makes me tear up is an amazing thing. You've written something very special, and I'll never look at her the same way on screen again.

10080 Minutes by TemplarSora    Rated: K+      Reviews (67) 
Summary: The day to day life of the crew of the U.S.S. Rafale. Started as part of the Twelve Trials of Triskelion Ficlet Flashdance.

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Chapters: 12    Table of Contents
Categories: Expanded Universes
Characters: None
Genre: General
Warnings: None
 Series: Rafale - Star Trek Online
Completed: No    Word count: 5669    Read Count: 24449
[Report This] Published: 20 May 2013 Updated: 20 Feb 2016
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A Problem With Authority

::hiss:: Blistering opinion there. Nicely written!

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Pink Leopards

Oops! Well and truly sprung. Giggles abound.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Burnt Offerings

What a smile. There's a song I love in which the writer proclaims all the ways the person she loves puts up with her; 'I cooked you seven meals, six of them on which you choked.' Reminds me in lovely ways of that.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Scars

I want to hug him. I especially love the passing description of the ship; so clear and painful.

Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 8: I Dreamt of You

Very evocative.

Shepherd's Reach by Miranda Fave    Rated: T      Reviews (68) 
Summary:

Part of the Twelve Trials of Triskellion Ficlet Challenge.



SHEPHERD’S REACH


SIXTH CUTTER SQUADRON


The creed of the Border Patrol Service is a simple one:


To save lives. To protect borders. To hold the line.


On the frontier, on the edge of Federation space, stands guard a series of stations and outposts charged with keeping a watchful vigil to be an ever vigilant sentinel. The first line of defence ...


Seven ficlets depicting life on a Space Station Relay Outpost for a newly appointed Lt. Commander. Outpost Shepherd's Reach, the farthest flung and unimportant outpost serving Star Station Hope is not the place of dreams. But it is where one Lt. Commander will make or break her career.


Chapters: 7    Table of Contents
Categories: Expanded Universes
Characters: None
Genre: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: Adult Language
 Series: The Watchtower Universe
Completed: Yes    Word count: 3524    Read Count: 13919
[Report This] Published: 20 May 2013 Updated: 25 May 2013
Reviewer: ErinJean Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Pack your bags and deodorant.

Nice last line especially.