Date: 31 Mar 2010 18:09 Title: Chapter 1
Very bleak, and that last sentence about Solids and Shapeshifters finally being equal was perfect. Grim stuff, though. Too bad for the Dominion--I like them! About the Vorta, the way I gandered it, their telepathic abilities left them open to some sort of telepathic attack by Ghidorah, yes? I liked the ADU history you created for the Dominion. It was very imaginative. I could also see the Jem'Hadar doing that. Another thought I had... didn't someone in the Godzilla movies use a sort of crystal ship using the power of collective minds, or something of the sort against Ghidorah? I thought it may have been Mothra's offspring. But I may be wrong. Sorry for the meandering review!
I'd call Ghidorah the equivalent of a telepathic warp core that is forever breaching. As to a crystal ship? Space Godzilla arrived in the form of a crystalline meteor, Death Ghidorah from 1996's Mothra was turned back by tapping into a forest's life-force, while Grand King Ghidorah used a dome to try and rob Earth's children of their lives in 1998's Mothra 3. Thanks for noticing the history. I based it on what little we know about how the canon-Dominion formed,a nd how the UFP first encountered them, especially hiding the shapeshifters as the True Power behind it all.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 13:04 Title: Chapter 1
What a nihilistic tale! So bleak and the foretelling was very effective, too. A very effective "monster" to boot. It read almost like a Creation myth. Real cool!
Thanks--one of the big things I tried to do here was show the ST enemy's modus operandi turned on them with a vengeance.