Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:38 Title: Chapter 1
I really like what you did with this format--it's unique and creative. I am kind of sad for the politics and manipulations, but somehow I'm left with the hope that with the help of his crew, Kirk can cut through all that and blaze a better trail. Nice job!
Thanks! I actually did follow up on this, in 'Encounter Thy Image', which uses this as a prologue. This format was certainly a challenge, but I've gotten good at drabbles, so it worked out. Glad you liked it, and thanks!