Date: 23 Apr 2009 13:53 Title: Chapter 3
You did a fantastic job on Part 6. I can't imagine how much time and energy went into this chapter of your series.From what I read, lots and lots of thought.I'd forgotten the Douwd but it makes sense that at least some would get involved in your tale. Very clever. You've delved deep into ST lore to build your world and it paid off.
Date: 23 Apr 2009 13:23 Title: Chapter 2
I take it back-this is the best so far! How you thought up all of the consequences of Q warfare is beyond me. You have created the essence of the Continuum with all of its rules in a way that makes it totally believable. Awesome!
Date: 03 Mar 2009 15:03 Title: Chapter 1
That was as intense as it was revealing. I think I learned more about the Q in that one story than in all their appearance in the various Trek incarnations combined. For the first time I got a grasp of how truly awesome their powers are, and how infinitesimal humanoids appear to them. Lady Q's agony at killing another of her kind was palpable and drove home the desperation of their plight. For near-gods to kill one another, wiping out countless ages of knowledge and experience over something as human as ideology... that's both awesome and tragic.
Date: 09 Feb 2009 13:55 Title: Chapter 1
Yes, that's definitely dark. I was lost for some of it; kinda hard to keep things straight, though, when you have multiple people who don't use names. But I did understand the ending and smirked to myself a bit at the small victory in an otherwise bloody war.