Date: 19 Oct 2019 14:07 Title: Episode 2.3 - Pursuit
Well, they've certainly have found trouble. Kudos for the variety of characters in your story.
This has bit of a buddy action movie feel to it with a hint of a military thriller. Definitely quite a departure from regular Trek. Not in a bad way though.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment. For some reason I got locked out of my account and am only now back in. I will submit Episode 3, which will carry this story forward (and includes a Serial Killer mystery and some surfing) as soon as I can figure out how to. Thanks!! rbs