Date: 19 Oct 2019 07:07 Title: Chapter 2.1 - New Hope: Pursuit
Well, they've certainly have found trouble. Kudos for the variety of characters in your story.
This has bit of a buddy action movie feel to it with a hint of a military thriller. Definitely quite a departure from regular Trek. Not in a bad way though.
Date: 19 Oct 2019 07:05 Title: Chapter 2.0 - The Colony of New Hope
Certainly a collection of very interesting and different characters here.
I'm not entirely clear what the background of this mission is, but it is obvious that the crew is expecting a great amount of trouble.
Date: 17 Oct 2019 06:00 Title: Chapter 1 - Flash Forward
Interesting interpretation of Trek. I particularly like the idea of a mobile JAG ship complete with its own judge, though it seems like this ship almost functions like a police cutter. There certainly is plenty of action to be had early.
The new position names and rank structure though is going to take some getting used to particularly since you are throwing us right into the midst of things.