Date: 29 May 2015 07:00 Title: End
Wow. That was deliciously fucked up on so many levels, and I knew it had to be her. I knew it and I completely and totally did not see this ending coming anyway, which meant you just took me on one Hell of a ride. It would be a Harrison to end her, though. It would have to be. Well done!
Date: 23 May 2015 12:18 Title: End
:O Don't really have much more to say than that. Cold, cold, cold. And twisted. And dark. If Kes is the happy flashdancer this time around you're definitely bringing the grimdark! A really intriguing series here TF, full of twists, turns and OMG moments. Great, twisted, squeam-inducing stuff! :)
Date: 23 May 2015 12:13 Title: Breakfast
Okay this is so twisted in so many ways... And yet you make it work! :) I like how you've written Henry, especially the "All I have left are jokes" line. Both smart-ass and full of despair at the same time. And with the promise of business to take care of... Oh this can't end well!
Date: 22 May 2015 04:39 Title: Genesis
I'm thinking Maria is harder to kill than that. I'm also wondering why in the world she couldn't just take a sperm sample. She makes so much extra work for herself by being a sick twisted bitch. Is she just really bored? Lonely? I think she needs a hobby or a pet. Who wants to chip in a few bucks to get Maria a chihuahua?
Date: 21 May 2015 04:12 Title: Breakfast
"He felt sick and he wasn't sure why; was it because of how everything happened? Was it because she was his father? Or was it because he liked it?"
Um, yes to both? Good heavens.
22 hours of sex with ... well, how shall I refer to her. His grandfather's rapist? His mother's rapist? His father? She's all that and more. Yikes. Maria's ability to induce weapons-grade Stockholm Syndrome in her victims is chilling. Nasty stuff.
Date: 20 May 2015 17:42 Title: Maria
Yup, Maria is not so much evil as twisted. That bunny boiler mentality to a whole new level. Talk about stalking. But it is also unnerving as to what her agenda is with Henry (other than the straight forward agenda on the cards at the moment) because with Maria there's always the possibilty of something else of needed Hank/Henry for some other endgame. Mind games and DNA fucking about aside. Twisted. Sick. To be honest, it's what I expect of you trekfan ;)