You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:50 Title: Act Five

Aw, I did like the clips at the end. Very good use of the nonspeaking trope. Morn is a bit like the Harpo Marx of Star Trek.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it! I just noticed that all of Act One was missing - it just redirected to Act Two. Fixed now!

 

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:46 Title: Act Four

And now Oprah! You can't say you don't have any real-life inspiration for this tale.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:42 Title: Act Three

A bit of a mystery going on. And so Jerry Springer! I was halfway expecting someone to drop to their knees and propose. Wacky doings on the station!

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:21 Title: Act Two

LMAO at poor Quark and the cushion fiasco.  So far, no actual words from Morn, which is how I suspected you'd play it.  

Nice to see Bashir pop up here.  He was never very good at platonic, so we'll see how his date goes.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it! I just noticed that all of Act One was missing - it just redirected to Act Two. Fixed now!

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 10:16 Title: Teaser

This cracked me up so hard.  Morn!  The most talkative man in the universe!

The script format really works for this -- nice and peppy pace while giving all the details needed to imagine the scene completely.  I'm curious to see whether you're going to stick with the gag where we never actually see him speak, or whether I'm about to read my first words from the lips of the infamous Morn -- a risky choice, if you go that route, but it will no doubt be interesting!

Onward!

You must login (register) to review.