Date: 05 Mar 2015 10:57 Title: Chapter 1
Young Spock juggling and choking back a chuckle in his messy room. I like it, as well as his misplaced distress over his parent's conversation. He was very quick to tell his father that he had been "meditating", though he did "feel himself relaxing" as he gave himself over to the batons' motion. Doesn't that qualify?
By showing his human side, you've made him into a real boy.