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Reviewer: Carol Johnson Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 16:39 Title: Chapter 1

I agree with the Admiral you do know how to set a scene. I like how Jamie sees the inner beauty of Anika. A good lesson learned. Their relationship blossoms.

Author's Response:

Thanks for kind remarks. Jamie and Anika took a wrong turn but, as you put it, in time their relationship blossomed. 

Reviewer: Fleet Admiral Christopher Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 10:19 Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I loved this story, It's really beautiful. You really know how to set the scene; it was neat when "Anika paused to stroke a velvety patch of moss" and told Jamie "Jamie, look! Isn't it beautiful?" it's cool how the romance between Jamie and Anika developed, even though it started off rocky.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm glad you found the story both beautiful and believable. The Star Trek: Beyone series has grown quite long, with more to come. As in all series, the stories are best read in order. 

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