Date: 04 Feb 2015 02:44 Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that's lovely.
I have to admit, the present tense threw me a bit. I find it odd but that's me, not you or your writing.
Things happen quickly, to be sure, but these are people who have known each other for a long time. I loved her line about not giving him four kids. Good going, Beverly.
Author's Response: I know it's a bit odd, but I prefer to use the present tense. Thanks. I hope you continue with the series.