Date: 03 Oct 2014 13:49 Title: Qo'noS, circa 2382
love your Kamarag stories, and even named my Kamarag-class ship in the game the Valdyr. I enjoy what you've done with the characters, and this story fits not just the history you've created, but the legacy of the man as well. I loved the San Fransisko reference, and how very Klingon the young man is worrying about the honor of his family and himself. Great job Mac, once again!
Author's Response: thank you most kindly Temp. I strongly suspect young Kamarag will return. Initially in BCI6. As for Valdyr, probably for the next challenge. My thanks again :)
Date: 28 Sep 2014 11:10 Title: Qo'noS, circa 2382
I laughed at the "San Fransisko" reference. It's interesting to see Klingons who want to join Starfleet after the War. I imagine it's a rather polarizing position: sure, Starfleet proved it's strength, but the Empire needs to rebuild as well. Nice job!
Author's Response: thank you. It is a conundrum but in the postwar world Starfleet could offer a slightly better path for a returning warrior.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 15:36 Title: Qo'noS, circa 2382
I love the small additions you made to this since I first looked at it, and find it a fitting entry for the challenge. It always takes resolve on the part of the one looking to buck the system, or subscribe to change for the better, but that decision is always made easier when those you respect approve. How fitting that Valdyr was able to help Kamarag realize the soundness of his choice, just as the boy's namesake was able to help Valdyr do the same those many years ago.
You know I'm a sucker for Kamarag stories, and even though this is about his great-nephew, it adds to the rich history you've created for the original. Loved it, and can't wait to read more about this namesake of the great man, surely destined for greatness in his own right.
Author's Response: my thanks as always. Hopefully with the coming Kamarag-the older biopic and BCI6 you will see more of the younger Kamarag. Valdyr is a wise woman but then you don't resign as chancellor (a job for life for the most part) and not be so :)
Date: 27 Sep 2014 15:32 Title: Qo'noS, circa 2382
Aw, I love how he thinks San Francisco is named for Ben Sisko! :)
He makes a promise (and we know he sees it through). Great stuff!
Author's Response: ha, yes, it sort of hit me. I imagine not everyone in the wide blue yonder is up to spec on SF. My thanks as always Jespah.