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Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2015 21:49 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 11

Well, issuing a 'kill order' against fellow Federation personnel isn't going to win Lam any popularity contests, and it's giving Owens & Company all the ammunition they need to escalate this conflict.

 



Author's Response: Indeed. However, escalating things could turn out to be tricky. Especially if it's 5 against 50,000. Thanks for the reading and the review.

Reviewer: Shada Dukal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 06:36 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 11

So, Wasko has made his final decision, he managed to see through Lam’s madness. Still, the realization that one Starfleet officer can send his men to kill another Starfleet officer is quite disturbing for Owens and his team. I really like Sharval’s attitude – ready to banter and exchange playful remarks while her shoulder probably kills her. Owens is not to be underestimated either, he realized how to wind her down by turning on his charm.

Despite his injury, Belore shows good humor and truly enjoys Owens’ amorous predicament. I hope this officer will listen to Wasco’s arguments and will be ready to support them.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Sharval. She breaks the mold a bit of the cliched rebel fighter, I hope. I wanted her to be playful and even a bit juvenile at times. Could be attributed to her species, and probably also the fact that this isn't Bajor and she isn't really fighting a decade old occupation.

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