Date: 02 Mar 2015 22:05 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 1
Mahoney continues to leave a bad taste in my mouth, and his attempt to sway Leva to his side makes him all the more slimey.
And now West's been thrown into the mix, directly in the path of someone who knows where most of Star's skeletons are buried.
I'm having a hard time seeing a way for Star to come out of this hot mess with her career intact.
Author's Response: Yeah, looks like everyone is gunning for our favorite Trill here, don't it? The odds are certainly not in her favor.
Date: 01 Feb 2015 18:09 Title: Part IV: The Improbable Alliance: 1
Leva has to express his Romulan dark side more often. People like West and Mahoney can use a dose of Romulan ruthlessness. He is deadly sure that there is some dirty personal vendetta behind Mahoney’s noble plans to do away with the pirates in this sector. Mahoney calls on his loyalty, but the more he tries to pour honey in Leva’s ears, the more suspicious the whole exercise looks like.
Author's Response: I think Leva maybe a bit concerned about letting the monster loose ... once out you never know if you can put it back in place.