Date: 21 Aug 2014 21:49 Title: Chapter 1
Wow...sorry it took so long for me to read this. Wish I had earlier. Once I got to reading, I had to postpone everything...even the bathroom! I can relate to young Jaime (did I spell that right?) in his meanness, unfortunately. The end of the story...actually had a frog in my throat and...something was in my eye. Great story!
Thanks for the nice comments, L.A! I bet you particularly enjoyed the parts written by young Noah. What an imagination that boy had. When I first received the copy from him, I was a bit taken aback... For an alternate adult view of the happenings, you might check out its companion story, "The Knowing: Aftershocks."
I am hoping to read more of your own work soon. Thanks again!