Date: 30 Jun 2014 05:08 Title: Chapter 1
This was a very entertaining read. I love the idea that this is being treated like a cooking contest, even though they are trying to give Lili some time off because she's so pregnant.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing Gatekeeper. Trying to work in Lili advance pregnancy was a challenge, so I think I can speak for both of the authors when i say, we glad you like our solution that sound both characters kindness and friendship.