Reviews For Free Fall
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Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 07:08 Title: Free Falling

I liked this glimpse into Commander Riker's mind as he faced the total destruction of the Enterprise and imminent death. And all because of "an antiquated Klingon Bird-of-Prey commanded by the losers of the Klingon Empire's latest game of thrones". Nice line.

And then his eyes opened. And there was light. His first thought was, "I'm alive". And then the hope of command. He is indeed a Starfleet officer, through and through.



Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. Surely, those same thoughts were going through everybody's mind. And glad you noticed the Game of Thrones reference. :D

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 19:02 Title: Free Falling

Neat to see a Riker POV on this scene. The last line was the most effective and telling to be honest as it spoke to Riker's person and his hopes and what he said at the end of the film.

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 09:16 Title: Free Falling

Good call and re-use of a cannon scene.
I bet they all thought what Data said that time.

Good Job.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 19:52 Title: Free Falling

... maybe ....

 

Well done!

Reviewer: zeusfluff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 19:23 Title: Free Falling

Wow. This was wonderful. I liked that it was from Riker's POV. Thanks for sharing this with us. 

 

Cannot wait to see what you come up for Day 7.

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