Date: 30 Sep 2015 09:44 Title: The Greatest Discovery of the 24th Century
I liked the addition to the TNG history and this seemed to be a very well-thought-out piece as well. I would suggest you work on your vocab a little, as there are some words used in not-quite-right ways. All in all, though, ENJOYABLE.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 12:31 Title: The Greatest Discovery of the 24th Century
It really dId have a feel for the Sagan universe series style. Very apt and very nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks. In watching the original Cosmos documentary series after the reboot wrapped up, I noticed that Sagan was a very eloquent visionary and philosopher in addition to being an astronomer and Neil deGrasse Tyson has very similar visions of a possible future.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 09:35 Title: The Greatest Discovery of the 24th Century
Oh, I definitely heard Sagan's voice! I always loved his reassurance about the universe, and I think you've captured that essence.
Author's Response: Yeah, I started to get the same sense after finding that nine second clip on YouTube.