Date: 22 Jun 2014 05:07 Title: Sinking
Ouch, that was cruel twist of fate.
You created a believable scene, the angst of noting being able to save the little Peeta and then when he try to do the last noble thing to spare the child suffering in the flames, you have the transporter come to the rescue to late.
Hard emotionally to read but your good use of language and the fact you make us care about the characters in such a short scene is credit to your writing skill. Well done.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 20:06 Title: Bittersweet
Very nice. You could feel her bewilderment and confusion at finally being safe, but not really believing it, and the sudden transition from leader to subordinate and the crash back to reality -- a comfortable reality, but one that won't fit right again for a long while. Very raw and gripping piece.