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Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 09:38 Title: Chapter 3: Retelling of the Past/Trouble

Only the beginning stage. It looks like Will has some rough times ahead. And he's worried about Laura being with Lwaxana. Yes, Eric had mentioned Deanna's mother. What's going on here?

Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 09:33 Title: Chapter 2: The Meeting

A revelation for Deanna. Will is tormented by his past, yet feels something amiss with Sartos. You've created a mystery here. 

Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 16:10 Title: Chapter 1: A Sacred Trust Broken

These moments with Will and his daughter are so sweet. He is such a great dad. Would he mind if I cloned him?



Author's Response: Not at all. Be my guest. I had fun writing this first chapter.

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