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Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 01:36 Title: It'll All Pan Out

???

I am even more confused...but holy cow...this was just completely insane. What has happened that they'd resort to these measures? Who the heck is Prescott really?

And what in the world is she thinking of doing to this poor guy?

That was a total head trip, and I really enjoyed reading this.

Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 01:32 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Que?

Wowwy wowwy wow...ok...gotta see the ending.

Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 01:29 Title: Breaking and Entering

Sonuva...and yet, even after that, I'm still not completely convinced he's massively disturbed. Dude, this is just getting trippy.

Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 01:23 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

So very confused with all this, but in a good way. I'm still not sure if Danny is telling the truth as this is happening...or if he really is crazy. But still, very fun.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 17:31 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Still leaves more questions than it answered, but oh-so well written.  I'll probably need to revisit this and see if I can make more sense out of it the second time through.  Need to read that companion piece, too.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 17:24 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Yeah, but will the drugs facilitate or prevent him being the conduit for communications.  And who the hell is calling?  And why?

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 16:58 Title: Breaking and Entering

This makes sense if my gut feeling frim the last chapter was true.  We'll see...

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 16:40 Title: What Had Happened Was ...

Starting to think none of this is real, and it's all happening in Danny's head thanks to some Section 31 mind game - or is that part of the mind game?  Nope, reading this section didn't help at all with the last installment - just as lost as ever.  Pressing on, to see where this leads...

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 16:33 Title: He Who Shall Not Be Named (But is Anyway)

What the hell was that?!  Was he captured, aided by an accomplice, it wasn't really a tricorder and he beamed himself somewhere safe...somewhere dangerous?  On to the next bit to (hopefully) find out.

Reviewer: Gatekeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 14:24 Title: It'll All Pan Out

So, it wasn't really Danny? You've done a great job playing with our minds, and I would love to see this expanded, and actually maybe get some answers to a few more questions. Brilliant execution! Thank you.

Reviewer: Gatekeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 14:22 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Ok. I'm confused. I think it's in a good way. Hopefully, I'll have more answers in the next section. Nice work!

Reviewer: MIck Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 14:11 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Not sure what to make of this yet.  Quite unexpected, but very well done.

Reviewer: MIck Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 14:09 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

What a good twist.  Looking forward to what's coming next.

Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 12:36 Title: Exit, Stage Left

Great action and he's a bit of a Romeo too, isn't he? I like the bits of humor that you inject. Very well written.

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 11:11 Title: It'll All Pan Out

well, that was an outstanding piece. In line with the others. Nice work.

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 10:21 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Ooooh, renegade doctor.  Will she let him live?  She's clearly messed up and we KNOW he's messed up ... I almost hope she patches him up and goes on the run with him.  Seems like she's just the kind of person he needs with him, and if there's anyone who would forgive her for what she's done, it's Danny.

Especially since she's pretty.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 08:55 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Evil, evil!

I write bad guy doctors, too. Egad, we must both have some sort of past issues.

Well done! I really enjoyed the trippy mind games.

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 07:40 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Nice open-ended close here man, a great end to what has been a real mystery of a ficlet series. I like that we still don't know exactly what is going on and the shift of pov was well done. Nice job!

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 07:06 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Frick! That's ... perplexing ... cold ... terrifying. I love how you managed to pull an even bigger mind f*** to end on. Clearly, there are a lot of connections going on and in-universe and cross-universe stuff but the mystery is most definitely mysterious and head scratching and brilliantly so. And then, in the end when Danny's end is about to come Or not ... a brilliantly neat twist at the end that leaves everything up in the air and so many future potentials in the offing. Really enjoyed this head-banging tale from ficlet one to seven. Super job.

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 06:04 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Well that was unexpected and yet while closing the circle leaves just as many questions. Good Job.

Congratulations on completing your TTOT 2014 tale.

Reviewer: RogueJawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 02:31 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Whaaaaaaaat?!?! Did I read that right?! There's two of Danny? This just got REALLY interesting..

Reviewer: RogueJawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 02:04 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

I think if I had to choose between death and getting the drugs I needed from Section 31 I would choose death, unless staying alive would result in some way to use their own tricks against them. Although.. at the end there is almost feels like Danny has figured out how to do exactly that. I can't wait to read part seven.

Reviewer: zeusfluff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 00:50 Title: It'll All Pan Out

Ah nicely put together TF. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading these little ficlets and seeing them come together at the end as a whole.


Thanks for sharing and I will be following more of your work in the future.

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 19:48 Title: Hailing Frequencies Open

Oooooh.  What did he see/hear?  Guess we have to wait until tomorrow to find out ...

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 19:47 Title: Breaking and Entering

Danny is in a bad way, wow.  This is intriguing.  Can Prescott be trusted?  I know Danny trusts anyone pretty, but I'm not so sure ...

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