Date: 25 May 2014 01:44 Title: Chapter 7
Good story, Bill. You've tied up very nicely and it was a great novelization of the game world. I like how it was kind of open at the end, the Endeavour's team thought it was a one way trip but Tavik is trying to get them out.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed the ending and like the novelization, Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 May 2014 21:07 Title: Chapter 7
A very...unique tactic, for sure. Suppose it does make sense, since they live in fluidic space, for their environment to be underwater-like.
Still, a nice end to an otherwise brutal event in the game. Not without loss, but they won. For now...
Author's Response: Yes unique tactic that surprise me when Jolene suggest it, but that main characters for you, get clever ideas you don't expect. I'm glad you felt that it captures some of the game brutal event and made a win with cost. Thanks for all your kind review words.
Date: 24 May 2014 16:17 Title: Chapter 7
This conclusion wraps everything up nicely. That's the thing about humans, they shouldn't be underestimated, even when it looks like things are going badly. Glad all the ships together pulled it out.
Author's Response: Glad you felt the conclusion wrap it up nicely. Yes together they pulled it off.
Date: 24 May 2014 13:47 Title: Chapter 7
Yes. Nice victory at the end. I love the switching between the vessels and how it all builds to what one could imagine onscreen as a climatic moment. Really neatly done FalseBill. I like too the touches with the swimsuits and the Xindi-Aquatic designed weapons etc being included in the tale. Nice conclusion. Wasn't sure how you'd pull it out of the bag.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you like the small touches and the conclusion.