Date: 23 May 2014 01:39 Title: Chapter 4
Awesome tie-in, FaleBill. Is this based off of Viscous Cycle or the last episode of the Borg arc that they redid? I loved that episode, but I haven't had a chance to play Viscous Cycle yet. Either way, from what I know of Viscous Cycle, this is an awesome novelization of what's going on in-game.
Author's Response: :) Glad you feel this is an"Awesome novelization". Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 22 May 2014 01:59 Title: Chapter 4
Forgive me, I read this earlier, but I got distracted. So here's my review.
Ooh. Fluidic space huh? Torla destroyed the enemy facility completely? Some tense stuff going on here.
Cannot wait to see where you go for Day 5.
Author's Response: Many Thanks.
Date: 22 May 2014 00:45 Title: Chapter 4
I like the shift here. I like the idea of bio-ships, which grow in the nesting sacs attached to other ships. That's an interesting idea. Nice job with this story, FB.
Author's Response: Again Thank you for reading and your feedback.
Date: 22 May 2014 00:17 Title: Chapter 4
Nice switch in story perspective. Now we take the fight to the Undine. Again, a piece that adds to the greater story you are telling FB. Good job.
Author's Response: Again thank you MF, glad the story is holding together for you.
Date: 21 May 2014 23:24 Title: Chapter 4
I love the idea of the coral life structures - is that your invention or is it from STO? I like the character of Torla, a true Romulan, willing to put her own life after her service, and I like the idea of a Romulan Republic. She seems like an interesting character. Good job!
Author's Response: I can't take credit for the Coral structures that was STO idea. Glad you like Torla she is a fun Romulan to write for.