Date: 21 May 2014 02:17 Title: Chapter 2
You have quite the battle going on here. I like the idea of being able to hide the two older vessels in a sort of sensor blind spot, but I hate that she needs their help and is having to call them out of the shadows. Hate she's losing the battle, too. Nice job building tension.
Author's Response: Thank you Gatekeeper.
Date: 20 May 2014 16:30 Title: Chapter 2
Yikes! Quite a battle playing out here. I'll never get used to calling them the Undine; I guess it's the Borg in me. They'll always be Species 8472 to me. <3 (Yeah, I typed a heart. I have a soft spot for anything VOY.)
Author's Response: I fully understand I still think of them as Species 8472, but then so does Admiral Tuvok in STO. Yay VOY!
Date: 20 May 2014 14:00 Title: Chapter 2
Things are not looking good for our heroes. I liked the tactic of hiding the other ships, but now we're at a kitchen sink phase of the battle, where everything is being hurled at the enemy.
Can't wait to see what happens tomorrow!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 20 May 2014 08:04 Title: Chapter 2
Definitely ramping up. I can imagine the damaged station looking a lot like the damaged ESD in the recent episode.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Yes ganges is looking a lot like ESD in that recent STO episode.
Date: 20 May 2014 07:49 Title: Chapter 2
Eek dramatic events. You depict the chaos and carnage of the battle really we'll. sounds bad for all concerned and very grim. Will there be a day three at this rate?
Author's Response: O they be a day three, but yes things aren't going to get any easier just yet for our heroes.