Date: 24 May 2014 02:58 Title: Chapter 1
I thoroughly enjoyed this little piece - the injection of a little tongue-in-cheek humor made the dire situation a little easier to bear. So much carnage. I hope they find a way to stop it.
Author's Response: I'm glad that the tongue-in-check humor made it easier to bear, I felt it had got a bit dark and I need to lighten the mood slightly. Thanks for reading & reviewing.
Date: 23 May 2014 06:33 Title: Chapter 1
I had so hoped things were finally getting better for the Federation, but it isn't to be, yet. Here's hoping they can get all their ships back in the game, and pull this one out for the Federation. Nice job.
Author's Response: Fingers cross Gatekeeper for our Heroes. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 19 May 2014 04:50 Title: Chapter 1
I experienced dawning comprehension with this story. I now totally get the backstory for putting Emmylou in a Galor! That's so cool! I didn't know you played STO, Bill! This is a great tie in to Season 9.
Author's Response: Glad you like this tie-in to Season 9.
Date: 18 May 2014 22:57 Title: Chapter 1
Oh the Undine invasions...
The STO universe certainly got thrown into chaos a few weeks ago. I'll be neat to explore this in Rafale later on, but this looks like it'll be a great way to introduce the rest of this community to this new facet of the universe we play in. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Author's Response: I hope I can deliver, but for now you've got me looking forward to your future Rafale story. Thank you.
Date: 18 May 2014 21:43 Title: Chapter 1
Tense, knuckle-biting action. Can't wait to see what happens next.
PS Feel free to send me these for betas - they're short and I should be able to get them done in time for you to post them. ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you LBD, Your Beta services would be most appreciated.
Date: 18 May 2014 20:28 Title: Chapter 1
Nice start, Bill. You might want to run through it again and proofread because there are quite a few punctuation arrors, but anything featuring 8472 gets my attention. Let's see where you take it. :)
Author's Response: Okay Kes7
Date: 18 May 2014 20:27 Title: Chapter 1
Ok, reading up on the whole STO univers this has that very much in its feel with the Undine and Planetkillers. So great job evoking that style and vibe. You also lend the impression that this is just an unrelenting battle of wills. Quite compelling and interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks MF, glad you liked it.