Date: 24 May 2014 18:44 Title: Chapter 7
Good story, Bill. You've tied up very nicely and it was a great novelization of the game world. I like how it was kind of open at the end, the Endeavour's team thought it was a one way trip but Tavik is trying to get them out.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed the ending and like the novelization, Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 May 2014 14:07 Title: Chapter 7
A very...unique tactic, for sure. Suppose it does make sense, since they live in fluidic space, for their environment to be underwater-like.
Still, a nice end to an otherwise brutal event in the game. Not without loss, but they won. For now...
Author's Response: Yes unique tactic that surprise me when Jolene suggest it, but that main characters for you, get clever ideas you don't expect. I'm glad you felt that it captures some of the game brutal event and made a win with cost. Thanks for all your kind review words.
Date: 24 May 2014 14:02 Title: Chapter 6
I loved that banter about the mints. That was awesome.
And then you went and killed him. *sigh* You must have taken a tip or two from Gibraltar... ;)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the Mint banter. Wow to be compared to Gibraltar, that is some high praise Indeed, thank you.
Date: 24 May 2014 09:17 Title: Chapter 7
This conclusion wraps everything up nicely. That's the thing about humans, they shouldn't be underestimated, even when it looks like things are going badly. Glad all the ships together pulled it out.
Author's Response: Glad you felt the conclusion wrap it up nicely. Yes together they pulled it off.
Date: 24 May 2014 06:47 Title: Chapter 7
Yes. Nice victory at the end. I love the switching between the vessels and how it all builds to what one could imagine onscreen as a climatic moment. Really neatly done FalseBill. I like too the touches with the swimsuits and the Xindi-Aquatic designed weapons etc being included in the tale. Nice conclusion. Wasn't sure how you'd pull it out of the bag.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you like the small touches and the conclusion.
Date: 24 May 2014 02:14 Title: Chapter 6
Another great STO tie-in. I like that you gave us a look into another part of ESD during the Undine attack. I used to hate ground missions but I found myself wishing the ground portion on ESD was more involved. The mission made it seem like there were few survivors, your story explores that there were. Great job!
Author's Response: Well i can't speak for ESD but Ganges is a similar enough station under a slightly lighter Undine attack that they are a few survivors. Maybe after TToT I should go back and do the Survivors tales? Cheers for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 May 2014 20:05 Title: Chapter 6
Yikes. That escalated quickly. I'm surprised they were able to keep up the banter in the heat of that moment. I'm sorry Reqknor's dead.
Author's Response: Sadly yes, I think it was gallows humour to try and hide their fear but yes poor Mister Reqknor, he will be missed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 May 2014 19:58 Title: Chapter 1
I thoroughly enjoyed this little piece - the injection of a little tongue-in-cheek humor made the dire situation a little easier to bear. So much carnage. I hope they find a way to stop it.
Author's Response: I'm glad that the tongue-in-check humor made it easier to bear, I felt it had got a bit dark and I need to lighten the mood slightly. Thanks for reading & reviewing.