Date: 24 May 2014 20:35 Title: Chapter 7
Holy crap! Dun-dun-dunnn, indeed! Didn't see that coming at all, but I did wonder if the Undine would somehow try to disrupt the summit or carry out additional terrorists acts - after all, how could they resist with so many of their enemies in one place. This e=bears continuing, pretty please? :)
Date: 24 May 2014 19:50 Title: Chapter 7
Called it. lol
Awesome story, bud! You did a great job introducing these very recent events in the setting we share to the community, and you had the NPCs perfect too. Be interested in seeing more of your Pathfinder series in the future! Well done!
Date: 24 May 2014 17:32 Title: Chapter 7
Well played. What kind of a paranoid mood must be permeating the galaxy with these guys on the loose? It calls back to the TNG episode "Conspiracy," only those guys were much more obvious about it what with their worm eating and all that. And those things were much easier to kill.
Date: 24 May 2014 16:40 Title: Chapter 7
Oh my goodness! The transporter chief, really? And poor Tanaka has no idea. That last line was chilling. Nice job!
I would love to see this expanded, to know what happens at the conference and if the Undine ultimately win, or if the Federation pulls out an ace in the hole.
Date: 24 May 2014 14:33 Title: Chapter 7
Ooh, chilling. So Pearson is Undine? Or did I misunderstand the implication? You have a great ear for dialogue, which has been true throughout and was again evident here. I really enjoyed this series and Pathfinder will definitely be going on my to read list! :)
Date: 24 May 2014 13:49 Title: Chapter 7
Oh my GAWD! I loved that. What a terrific ender. What a reveal. I mean, I thought the charming old lady was going to impart some sage advice to Tanaka. Yet all along she's a wolf in sheep's clothing. That's brilliant. Loved it.
Date: 24 May 2014 02:50 Title: Chapter 1
The calm after the storm, but I get the feeling that neither Rhys nor L'Gran can relax, just in case any more flashpoints burst into a flame that needs to be extinguished.
I like the relaxed interplay between them. Shows they've been together a while and know each other well. I also like how, at the end, L'Gran realizes that he has issues of his own that need tending to.
Date: 24 May 2014 01:23 Title: Chapter 6
Points to Rhys for the Chai Latte and a hot bath. That's a combo I can get behind. The camraderie between the two here is well done and warming. Let's hope everyone will realize that they're stronger together than apart.
Author's Response: Thanks trekfan! I appreciate that. I really enjoy writing them together.