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Date: 30 May 2014 08:38 Title: Chapter 6: No Other Choice

The decadent kitchen and the overly luxurious food (which is also potentially lethal) is another nice touch.

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Date: 30 May 2014 08:34 Title: Chapter 5: Connection at a Deeper Level

The telepathic link is stronger than we had thought, I see.

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Date: 30 May 2014 08:32 Title: Chapter 4: An Illusion At Best

So Doctor Mengele has arrived, I see.

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Date: 30 May 2014 08:30 Title: Chapter 3: A Chance Link

Way to go, Beverly, reminding Will that Deanna's getting closer and closer to her due date!

Seriously, though, the telepathic link - and then its abrupt severance - was a neat touch.

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Date: 30 May 2014 08:27 Title: Chapter 2: Waking Up

Well, this is somewhat worse, although Kina seems kindly. But it's obvious that their captivity has been going on for quite a while. That has got to be disheartening.

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Date: 30 May 2014 08:19 Title: Chapter 1

Uh, oh - this is a scary beginning.

I like the contrast between the domestic scene and then - kidnapping!

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