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Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 01:27 Title: Chapter 2

I really liked how the action moved from the all too perfect holodeck creations to the all too imperfect life that Rhys and the others are really leading. And now our two scenes shall meet ....

Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 20:19 Title: Chapter 2

Always enjoy the image of a Starfleet officer standing on her bridge in full period dress while her crew gawks in surprise. It's so beautifully anachronistic.

I liked the holodeck scene and it tells us quite a bit about Rhys. Fantasy and too tight dresses arent her thing, this is a gal who prefers the wild outdoors. Let's see how she handles possessed Klingons.

Author's Response: When I first wrote the outline for this story I almost considered approaching this differently. I know its been used a lot, but the holodeck/anachronistic dress trope is really one of my favorite Star Trek ones. She grew up with three brothers. I'm scared for those Klingons.

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