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Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 04:04 Title: Chapter 6 - The Smell of Home

Imaginative story Jespah, very nice.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 20:40 Title: Chapter 6 - The Smell of Home

Great ending.  I just wish there was some way for those aboard the Enterprise-D to know they were successful.  And for those on the NX-01 -- just think of how jealous they'd be if they knew Porthos had gotten a view of the future.  Maybe T'Pol can mind meld with him and find out where he went. ;-)



Author's Response:

Ha I never thought of that, but in canon she's rather standoffish with him (she can't really get past his aroma). And I just had this vision of someone catching him in mid-reentry and the story kind of grew from that.

Thank you so much for reading!!

Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 11:02 Title: Chapter 6 - The Smell of Home

Aw, happy ending. Even the shy and somewhat unsure of herself Lili seems to have found another purpose.

Again, I thought bringing together Trek's two foremost pets on a shared adventure was brilliant.

Well done.

Author's Response:

Many thanks; I'm so glad you liked Porthos and Spot's little adventure. :)

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 14:54 Title: Chapter 6 - The Smell of Home

lovely conclusion,

Did love princess Spot, coming to Data to comply with Porthos request and make Geordi look wrong, how very cat like.

Then Porthos getting Lili snapped hair-tie so he can play with the string as per Princess Spot request.
A very clever and well though out take on favourite things.

Well done, here hoping for more from both Porthos and the future cat in the future ;-)

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks - though I have no idea how I'd get them back together again. ;)

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