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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 19:58 Title: Chapter 3 - The Hull Breach

Ouch!  Awful to know that Porthos is gone, but to have no idea where he is, or what happened to him.  I feel for Archer, and Lili, who is undoubtedly blaming herself.  It'll be interesting to see if they can figure out where he went and how to get him back, or if that task will be left to the Enterprise-D crew.



Author's Response:

It has to be scary on their end. On the TNG side, it's just amusing, but for Archer, etc., they've got to assume the worst.

Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 00:05 Title: Chapter 3 - The Hull Breach

Aw man, the worst news for a dog owner is to hear that their beloved pet had disappeared. That's a crushing blow for Archer. But there is hope ..

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I knew it would have to be scary on their end of things.

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2013 17:17 Title: Chapter 3 - The Hull Breach

O nicely done.
The balance between the TNG crew puzzlement and the ENT Crew sense of lost.
Lili guilt is well balanced and Archer reactions to the lost of a life-sign and then being told there a beagle life-sign short feel so well done.

Author's Response:

Many thanks to you.

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