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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 23:02 Title: June 4, 2158

Yay another letter reply from Lili, Naurr tale will be waving as usual upon reading it.

I think you’ve done a good job of showing Lili good heart nature by her relationship with both Treve and with Yimar the sitter. Also a nice trick to highlight her tiredness with her unusually short reply.

Top marks as always.

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks - a short reply as I was kinda tired myself. :)

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