Date: 06 Oct 2013 14:53 Title: Chapter 1
Wow, a excellent effort at a second date, Seven behaviour seems perfectly in character and the poor Doctor, I can only imagine how ineffective he has been in the office today, while he tried in vain to come up with a second date idea.
The clock watching to end of shift was a good way to underline how distracted he is, but who can blame him, I’d be distracted if I had a date with Seven.
I like how the while this could be mundane, by adding the good doctor thoughts and worries, you make this a wonderful romance story and capture the real nature of love, people who accept you for who you are.
I do like that you finally get the doctor to question about Seven about her thin catsuits in cold weather. The description of the supplement and the cobbler, do like Seven got some baking knowledge left over from the Borg collective, or was it a deflection that she had enjoy helping Neelix baking in the past perhaps?
The Kadis-Kot game was a nice scene, it might not be the shortest game Seven every play but it revealed a lot about the two characters.
Here hoping the tricky third date story isn’t long in coming as this is an interesting romance to read.