Date: 04 Oct 2013 21:48 Title: Chapter 7 - Legacies
A nail-biting ending that climaxed on a bittersweet note. I love how you worked The Preservers in here, implying that their destruction would lead to the annihilation of many other Federation races.
This was a top-notch effort, tying in so many eras and ideas from the Trek universe, and meshing all that together with seven free writes. I get the impression that one has to read this piece several times to uncover all the gems hidden within. Great job of weaving so many plots, characters and timelines together into one cohesive story. :-)
Author's Response: Why thank you for reading and reviewing Lil black dog. I think you give me far to much credit here, but thank you very much for all your kind words and encouragement.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 10:52 Title: Chapter 7 - Legacies
Ah, a fitting end for the bastards. Good riddance.
And quite a lead-in to our current adventures. Or is this taking place at the same time? Afterwards? Oh dear. Wibbly wobbly timey wimey indeed. Good to see the end of the Chilo threat for now, but way to put humans at the top of the hit list, Douglas, lol.
Not too bad, bud. A nice, short adventure. I think the Chilo are shaping up to be Ad Astra's own personal bad guy group.
Author's Response: It does feel good to finish to do the Chilo. I would say it happening at the same time but with all Wibbly wobbly timey wimey it hard to be sure how to fit in relations into the multiverse II story. Glad you liked the adventure, I think you're right the Chilo are Ad Astra's own big bad.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 16:27 Title: Chapter 7 - Legacies
Bittersweet ending, and things are safe for now.
A wild ride!
Of course you know I adore time travel stories. They are a great device for bringing people together who really aren't meant to be together, and can be great fun. And yours was!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoy your wild ride and despite the bittersweet ending you had fun. thanks for reading and taking the time to review.