Reviews For Douglas' Bug Hunt
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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 21:32 Title: Chapter 6 - Class 101

Nice use of the catch-phrase from the previous chapter to help Douglas identify Daniel's true identity.  This plot just keeps getting thicker and thicker - just went from pea soup to oatmeal.  But seriously, FB lots of nice twists and turns in here to keep the reader guessing.



Author's Response: I'm glad you still enjoying the twists and turns and that you think I've manage to keep the reader guessing.

Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 09:46 Title: Chapter 6 - Class 101

Oh you silly Klingon, thinking you were born with a bat'leth in your hand. *sigh* Always important to pay attention. Good to see Douglas was. The ending line of it was great, and I totally called it from the start, probably just like him.

Author's Response: :-D Glad it feel like a nature reveal for those paying attention. Glad you like the ending line.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 16:21 Title: Chapter 6 - Class 101

Jobs to do! It's a meme!

Yeah, I was wondering why he was saying that (and now I know!).



Author's Response: It's just a meme but somehow that innocent phrase becomes very loading when you know the Chilo.

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