Date: 04 Oct 2013 20:51 Title: Chapter 4 - I thought I would die, but was afraid I might not
Well, some help received on several fronts. At least now Douglas has a clearer view of what he must do.
And let me take this opportunity to commend you on tying all these free writes together. Had I been asked, I would've said it would be nigh on impossible to mesh all of these topics into one cohesive story, but you're managing it quite nicely. Kudos to you, sir. :)
Author's Response: Why thank you very much Lil black dog. May I take the opportunity to thank you for the Beta read help, which is Kudos to you Madam. :)
Date: 23 Sep 2013 16:08 Title: Chapter 4 - I thought I would die, but was afraid I might not
And the plot thickens!
Good way to tie the WFWs together - and now it's a race against time ....
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far and that the ties do feel natural not forced. The clock is ticking indeed.