Date: 28 Sep 2013 18:20 Title: Chapter 2 - Loss of Concentration
As sad as this chapter was, I liked the fact that Douglas took the time to reflect on what James meant to him. Very evocative of Jim Kirk, and the feelings of sadness and remorse he displayed (usually through facial expressions, not verbally) on the loss of a crewmember.
Poor Douglas. Now he is injured and all on his own, having to find a way to deal with and stop this threat.
Author's Response: Aye, a good captain should care about those under their command. cheers for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 19:34 Title: Chapter 2 - Loss of Concentration
Good quick thinking but OWWW!!
I loved loved loved the quote from James in this, and it's absolutely true. I could picture any number of officers saying those exact words at different times; the Romulan War. The Klingon cold war. The wars with the Cardassians. The Dominion War. Battles against the Borg. Never have such truer words been spoken. I'll have to remember that line for later on.
Author's Response: Thanks. Feel free to use the quote in your own stories.