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Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 16:57 Title: Chapter 5

Uh, oh.

Well, our Pilot has a sense of such things. The head surveyor and the captain are at odds, and the captain, it seems, is serving at the deference to (and perhaps the reluctant pleasure of) the head surveyor.

I love how the aliens are barely shown; it's really just a shadow of them and I think that's how it should be at this stage. Otherwise, you're like a fan dancer who drops all her fans in 2 seconds. 

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