Date: 14 Apr 2014 17:15 Title: Chapter 1
I'm not familiar with the characters, but it's a nice story and very well written. It makes me want to learn more about the blue-skinned girl. Half Andorian? No wiggling antennas were mentioned. And definately a human name--one that I like and have used for a girl in my own series.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 19:36 Title: Chapter 1
He is already so clearly Captain Hank Harrison even at this age, going around to check on his 'crew'. A sweet bit of characterization, and young Hank and Bethany are so damn cute. It seems like such a casual meeting. And yet, not quite.
Ah, Hank. Yeah, he's always been the type to talk to people and hear them out. He likes to talk. Loves it. A bit of the captain in him here and the meeting between the two is classic stuff (based on a real experience of mine in many ways). From one misstep comes a lifetime of friendship, love, and fun. Thanks for the review :)