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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 15:53 Title: Chapter 1

OMG!  That was all kinds of sweet, and cute, and heartwarming.  I wonder if later in life the two will realize that they met once before.

As a student of languages, I really liked how you had the boy deal with English - rewinding the question in his mind and pausing to formulate the proper response with correct word order and vocabulary.  Very believable, and a situation I can personally relate to more than once. ;-)

All in all, a very enjoyable tale that made me grin. :D

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