Date: 17 Oct 2012 19:40 Title: Chapter 1
I love the K&S&M interactions--very amusing! But I also really appreciated how, with all they've seen and done, these three can still find awe for the beauty of nature. I think you brought that out really well. I also like how Spock gave the other two that experience as a gift, but did it so quietly and subtly that it almost wasn't noticeable. Well done.
Date: 15 Apr 2009 12:08 Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I loved this. Beautifully written and the imagery was fantastic.
You certainly write a good Spock vs. McCoy :D You have McCoy at his best and most lovable.
Also, technically, your writing is really high calibre. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
(up before the sun)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story - it's so much fun to write Spock vs. McCoy scenes. I just can't resist. :D
Date: 10 Feb 2009 14:28 Title: Chapter 1
Oh that is excellent writing that captures the three characters so perfectly. Very well done. Though much kudos for the following line:
"My mother is quite fond of a peculiar practice involving the throwing of frozen projectiles."
That was a laugh out loud moment!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The image of Amanda trying to get Spock engaged in a snowball fight is a funny one. ;)