Date: 12 Sep 2013 19:53 Title: Narrow
Heh...well, certainly wasn't expecting it. That was very different from what I'm used to reading, but you ended it with a very funny surprise that I really wasn't expecting, and yet...isn't that usually the problem? There just isn't enough room? I laughed there at the end. Good job.
Author's Response: I really wouldn't know what's usually, because I have absolutely no experience whatsoever in that area, but I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks.