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Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 19:53 Title: Narrow

Heh...well, certainly wasn't expecting it. That was very different from what I'm used to reading, but you ended it with a very funny surprise that I really wasn't expecting, and yet...isn't that usually the problem? There just isn't enough room? I laughed there at the end. Good job.

Author's Response: I really wouldn't know what's usually, because I have absolutely no experience whatsoever in that area, but I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks.

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 08:09 Title: Narrow

Nice to see this story, made it over from the Forums weekly write.

Like you gave Angela second thoughts and the true meaning of the story title.

Author's Response: Thanks. Writing this story was like taking dictation.

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