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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 07:31 Title: Chapter 5

Some great lines in here--the TOS Jim Kirk, but a little grittier, edgier.  Definitely had that NuKirk feel.  He and Spock aren't quite best buds yet, and that came through loud and clear.  But what is that transmission?  And what is Spock trying to reconstruct from memory?  Guess I'll never know unless I get reading. ;-)

Author's Response: He's definitely my hardest to catch, I think. I'm grateful you think I have <3 ::grins!::

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 01:43 Title: Chapter 5

Hee, hee. Love all the cocky bravado of NuKirk here. The guy is waiting to get a faceplam in his face big time. Love the banter and the teasing of Spock by Kirk in this. And also how the message makes him trip out. Something very amiss about it all.

Author's Response: Thank you :D I have trouble with him, he's the one I connect to the least, I'm glad I got him. (Love hearing your thoughts on this.)

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 15:45 Title: Chapter 5

And again, a blur, a disconnect ... an interphase .....

Author's Response: ::ominoushummmmmm::

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 06:03 Title: Chapter 5


Okay now that THAT'S out of the way, let's get to the point:  This was great.  Full of funny lines with a great insight into nuKirk's character.  My favorite:

"Spock disagrees totally. That's how I know I'm right."

Oh, so Kirk.

Author's Response: ALL WILL EVENTUALLY BE CLEAR. Though perhaps not for a while ;) Thank you so much, dear.

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 06:03 Title: Chapter 5

LOL, oh, NuKirk is that cocky SOB but loveable. A game of "poke the Vulcan" I liked that a lot. This is a nice take on the bridge crew dynamics. Kirk seems to be able to make out something but what is a mystery ... the phrasing is strange. Hmm. I'm still grasping for a decent theory. But I will continue to think hard on this. Fun read.

Author's Response: Trust that man to make it a sport. ::grins:: As I mentioned in chat, I do have a lot of trouble with his character; that I could get it right is very gratifying, thank you for saying so.

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