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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 13:05 Title: Chapter 2 One Helluva Ride!

Aha!  Who those people were in the prologue and what they were doing is now becoming clear. :)  The debris is what remains of the Tardis, methinks. ;)

Reviewer: Kirok-Of-LStok Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 00:15 Title: Chapter 2 One Helluva Ride!

This started out as being a serial called "Pirates of the Federation" - it might still happen - but this story arc marks the end of one era and the start of another. This will probably segue into something titled "The Forlorn Hope". Where does the name come from? Interesting story behind that...

Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 20:49 Title: Chapter 2 One Helluva Ride!

Wow, that... was one heck of an ending, man. o.O Holy cow. Looking forward to the rest!

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 20:22 Title: Chapter 2 One Helluva Ride!

Ok, Kirok is in a bad way.  And a pirate, this could be fun.  I'm not familiar with your characters but this has me intrigued.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 19:50 Title: Chapter 2 One Helluva Ride!

Huh - let's see what happens next ....



Author's Response: I really need another chapter between this and the next because they get picked up by... Someone else but I've got three 'drama moments' that will fill this week. You'll be suggesting I tag this as angst!

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