Date: 19 May 2013 11:31 Title: Chapter 1
Cute, very cute. Is this in response to Steff's request for a descriptive scene? If so, you did a great job with it; very physically evocative.
This is indeed a response to Steff's request for a descriptive scene. I tried my best, I'm glad you found it satisfactory. Thanks :)
Date: 19 May 2013 01:14 Title: Chapter 1
Seeing Nick happy makes me happy. I might be a fangirl for Hank, but I love him, too (and everyone on the Pearl) and seeing him playing with his little girl was amazing. I love the chase, and how you held that tidbit to the end, and the joy written into every word. Terrific work!