Date: 17 May 2013 18:07 Title: Chapter 1
*Hugs Corry and Scotty*
Okay, enough of that. I adore this piece, as any piece that has Corry and Scotty in it. The setting and atmosphere of this story is beauitfully constructed, everything set up masterfully from the moonlight to the tolling bell.
Corry and Scotty's interplay and dynamics are great, as usual. The way these two communicate without actually saying the words is a true testament to your writing. The body language speaks volumes for Scotty.
Corry's thought's on the war and the way Scotty is handling it is all him. The poetry was a nice touch that helped drive home the deeper meaning of the piece. I very much enjoyed this.