Date: 17 May 2013 18:29 Title: Chapter 1
Yes, yes, yes,. I love the TOS guys and this piece was all TOS, all the time. The interplay between Bones and Kirk was classic, each one acting exactly as they would in that situation. I could hear the alien planet noise in the background while reading this piece (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSVC3FB_1LA) and was smiling throughout.
Kirk being Kirk, he did nothing in moderation, and he paid for it mightily. The way McCoy and Spock both acknowledged it, but didn't really acknowledge it, was subtle humor at its finest. McCoy's final remark at the end was a classic TOS episode one liner. Roll credits, sound applause. Well done.
Date: 05 May 2013 02:58 Title: Chapter 1
that is right on the money. Nicely done with Kirk in particular ringing true (picturing late season 2 Shatner, putting on a few pounds, wearing the green tunic...) Good work. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I think it would be around there, yeah.