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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 15:18 Title: Chapter 2

That was an interesting Prime Trek universe, opening scene. What with Archer, Leah and the other human religions leaders. It does feel in character and so like him try to use our faults and differences as a way to try to get others to join the Federation.

So Mirror Josh motives might be to do with faith, of course so early it could all be an intelligence play by Izo to get what he wants. I’m surprise Leah is so trusting of Pike and Ramirez, it all seems to covenant or are you trying to show that even in the MU a little faith can make things a lot better?

Still it was well written as always and I do want to read on.

Author's Response:

I write the MU as being a place loaded with obigations. You owe people this, they owe you that. Otherwise, very little gets done!

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2013 11:19 Title: Chapter 2

And the plot thickens.  I must admit, I did wonder if 'the tribe' had something to do with the connection between Benson and Rosen...

Still liking very much the theme of how religion is perceived in both universes.



Author's Response:

Definitely the tribe - I believe the first story I ever posted here is The Light and it is referenced here.

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