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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2021 01:41 Title: Chapter 20

I like it that Q now has a non-interference policy (one that our more familiar Q just barely skirts in STH...) 

Also unexpected twist for Rameriz to jettison the nacelles - eminently sensible - fortunate that there was a jettison mechanism installed.

Quite an enjoyable fight sequence at the end with Lar'ragos. The Baron was custom made for a well-deserved drubbing.

Thanks!! rbs

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Thank you!

Yes, the Baron rather had it coming, didn't he?

Reviewer: vincenthugo Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 16:02 Title: Chapter 20

Lar'ragos may have felt no satisfaction from taking down the Baron, but I certainly did! An exciting and satisfying chapter.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the scene more than either of those characters apparently did.  ;)

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2010 13:05 Title: Chapter 20




Amazing. So much going on in that chapter. Blowing the warp nacelles free to climb back out of the atmosphere. The intervention of the Q. Lar'ragos's clever destruction of the android and his brutal smackdown of the Baron.

All I can say is Bravo!

Author's Response:

Thanks :-)  This was one of those chapters where so many things come to fruition that it's difficult to give everything and everyone proper attention... I'm glad to know it came together well.

Reviewer: SLWatson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2009 23:43 Title: Chapter 20

Well, it was definitely good to see the Baron get some back for it. I'm guessing it's the same Continuum as before; the no-interference rule is a neat twist on it. Good work, still!

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