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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2021 19:41 Title: Chapter 19

No shortage of action here, but the big moment is.. 

The Baron is a phoenix? I was expecting him to be hard to kill, but this was quite the twist.

Still likeing the Pehlan monster - shame its under the Baron's control. Kutev continues to be a fun character as well.  Really good ensemble storytelling - lots of fanfics seem to really center on one or two characters - I'm a fan of ensemble storytelling.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response:

Well, not a phoenix, precisely, but he's definitely something with more than one life. ;-)

Reviewer: vincenthugo Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 20:57 Title: Chapter 19

Wait...what just happened with the Baron?!

Author's Response:

Something old became... something new.  ;-)

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2010 12:56 Title: Chapter 19

Woah, that's intense. You have a real skill at juggling all of these different storylines together at the same time as they come together in one huge crapshoot! Talk about the "sheet" hitting the fan!

And what is that with the Baron? Is he a Timelord? Or just inspired by one? Either way, I love it!

Author's Response:

Timelord?  What is this Timelord of which you speak?  ;-)

Reviewer: SLWatson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2009 01:08 Title: Chapter 19

If it time travels like a Gallifreyan, and it has a title like a Gallifreyan, and it regenerates like a Gallifreyan...

::grins:: I dunno if you meant the parallels between the Baron and the Master, but they're pretty undeniable. Before, I kinda brushed off the resemblance, but the regeneration was a clincher. So, was Doctor Who the inspiration?

And now, to see if the Gibraltar manages to pull this off.

Author's Response:

The universe is vast and contains, as the Vulcans so readily point out... infinite diversity. These realities coexist and on rare occasions, intersect.

However, I don't recall the word Gallifreyan appearing anywhere in this story. ;-)

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